After a curse dooms a young prince to indefinite sleep, an unsuitable mud throwing princess must find a way to save him, his throne, and get revenge for the mother who died before her time.
Wow this sounds so exciting and very comincal! I would definately want to see this movie!
However, I am a bit confused about the last part of the sentence, explaining the princess getting revenge on a mother... whose mother is it? I would clearly state what you mean by this.
The antagonist (the curse)is clearly stated but maybe you could include who curses the prince
I like your logline because it makes your story seem like a switch from the norm. Usually the prince is the one who saves the helpless princess, but in your story the opposite holds true which I enjoy seeing. The one thing this logline appears to be missing is the mention of an antaganist, or what is stopping the princess from achieving her goal. While this genre isn't my style, this logline still makes the story appealing which is a great feat.
Wow this sounds so exciting and very comincal! I would definately want to see this movie!
ReplyDeleteHowever, I am a bit confused about the last part of the sentence, explaining the princess getting revenge on a mother... whose mother is it? I would clearly state what you mean by this.
The antagonist (the curse)is clearly stated but maybe you could include who curses the prince
I like your logline because it makes your story seem like a switch from the norm. Usually the prince is the one who saves the helpless princess, but in your story the opposite holds true which I enjoy seeing. The one thing this logline appears to be missing is the mention of an antaganist, or what is stopping the princess from achieving her goal. While this genre isn't my style, this logline still makes the story appealing which is a great feat.
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